My 13 Favorite Shadow World Scenes (So Far)

One thing I love about a book release is catching people quoting their favorite lines and scenes.  It makes me think about my own favorites in the series, and how they might differ from a reader’s.  There are some moments that have just been a blast to write, some so much so that I didn’t want them to be finished and would keep going back over them hoping I could stay engaged with the moment.

So, for fun, here are my favorite moments and scenes (sometimes chapters) of the Shadow World series thus far.  The list is weighted slightly toward Shadowstorm because it’s freshest on my mind, but they’re in order of chronology, not preference.

Needless to say, SPOILERS FOR THE ENTIRE SHADOW WORLD SERIES UP TO BOOK 6

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1. Queen of Shadows – Opening Scene

Untitled 2Openings are freaking HARD to write, but after about fifty different takes on it, I was satisfied.  I just loved the image of our poor, mentally battered heroine finding herself buying beer and candy bars next to the man who will turn out to be her partner – who is himself there buying ice cream blissfully unaware he’s just met his soul mate.

One of the things I was trying to do in QoS was to lay it all out there from page 1 – I never made any real secret of how things would end up for Miranda.  I wasn’t interested in some will they/won’t they tired romantic cliche; I was interested in how and why.   As the LOLCats say, “WHY YOU SURPRISED? IS TITLE OF BOOK!”

 

2. Queen of Shadows – Miranda and David’s “first date”

There’s something so fun about the juxtaposition of supernatural creatures and incredibly ordinary situations.  First, we start off seeing Kat and Drew react to David’s sudden appearance, their first impression being David asking if he should kill Drew; then Miranda drags him off for ice cream, and we get to watch a 350 year old nerd scarf down a sundae that would render most humans catatonic from sugar overload.  After that, of course, is the shagging, which is always fun.

3. Shadowflame – “The Prime of California Had Arrived.”

Deven’s introduction in the second book remains one of top five in the whole series.  I just love the “visual” – it’s a cinematic and iconic moment.  I particularly like the “shot” of Deven wordlessly pulling aside the lapel of his coat and exposing both Ghostlight and his Signet – Miranda knows exactly who she’s dealing with before a name is spoken by either.  The next few chapters in fact delight me because I know that all the enmity between them will eventually turn into an intimate friendship that changes them both profoundly.  You’d never know it based on how they meet.  I love that.

4. Shadow’s Fall – A Doomed Shag

Again, it’s those seemingly ordinary moments that I enjoy most with my characters, and the part in the third book where Miranda and David attempt to have sex but she ends up falling off the desk and he gets hit in the head with his own Signet tickles me.  I’ve always thought sex is kind of inherently silly, and if you can’t laugh with your partner, your relationship is probably going to get really boring really quickly.  No couple has misty Sarah McLachlan sex or mad passionate Nine Inch Nails “Closer” sex every time.  Not even badass vampires.

5. Shadow’s Fall – The very last line of the book

Oh, that line still makes me so happy.  Shadow’s Fall was arduous to write; there was so much Untitled 2aawfulness about to happen, and getting there with the right amount of tension and pain took a lot out of me.  I knew people were going to lose their minds when it was pretty clear that yes, David was really dead – and I let that shock stay in place up to the very last possible second, but I didn’t want to drag it out just for the sake of drama.  I wanted everything to fall apart so utterly it would break every heart in the room (it sure as hell broke mine), but then to offer this bewildering second of hope with a dose of WTF that I hoped would sustain everyone the year it would take to get the sequel out.  I like to think it worked.

6. Of Shadow Born – The Haven Comes Back to Life

The fourth book is one of my favorites – I just felt like the whole thing clicked really well.  I loved watching Miranda try to hold herself together without David; not so much because of the sadness involved, but because it showed both the strength of her character and how much she had learned in the last few years about how to lead and how to survive.  The moment where she hits the recall button to call the Elite back to the Haven, and all the systems come back online while Stella watches, gets me every time.

7. Of Shadow Born – Olivia’s Houseguest

I was really proud of the scene where David wakes up in Olivia’s loft with his mind all screwed up after the transition to Thirdborn (and that whole resurrection thing) – I doubt anyone really noticed, but the scene starts out without any actual reference to David himself.  No pronouns, no sense of who he is as a narrator – I mean, we know who he is, but it’s not even until midway through the scene that he starts thinking of himself as “he.”  The moment he says, “I’m alive,” the language switches to a more traditional narrative.  Maybe it’s pretentious, but it was fun as hell to write.

8. Shadowbound – The Proposal

I’m so mean to poor Deven.  Miranda has to deal with a lot of tragedy and pain, but most of it comes from outside herself; she doesn’t for a second believe she knows everything, but she does know herself, and knows who she wants to be.  Dev on the other hand is locked in a seven-century battle with his own self-hatred.  But I wanted to give him just a little bit of happiness before the next tragedy befell him, and what seems like a totally random idea on Jonathan’s part leads Dev to one of the few purely happy experiences of his life.

You know, until I fuck it all up in the next chapter.

9. Shadowbound – Turning Nico

Nico’s another fun character because of inner conflict.  His perspective on becoming and living as a vampire is fundamentally different from the others’ so turning him into a vampire was a chance to turn all that white light and happy trees stuff upside down and expose the darker creature underneath.  I especially like when he tries to eat Stella in the library; who doesn’t love bitey sexual tension?  A relationship between the two of them seemed like just the right kind of weird.  The best part, though, is the way he reacts to Miranda and David in that scene – there’s more to a Signet than just legal authority, there’s an instinctive recognition and fear even for an above average vamp like Nico.  We also get our first real look at the chemistry between him and David, which I always thought was a yummy thing indeed.

10. Shadowstorm – Miranda’s Walk to Holding

Everyone loves that moment in a movie where the bad guy is marched down a hallway by law enforcement, most likely to the glass-walled cage he’ll escape from in the next act.  I’d been itching to give Miranda a scene like that, showing how alienated she’s become from the human world even though technically she’s still a part of it.

11. Shadowstorm – David Juggling Nutter Butters

I mean, c’mon, if you were telekinetic you’d totally do the same thing.

12. Shadowstorm – Deven and Miranda’s Coffee Date

Untitled 2bEvery writer slips bits of her own history into her characters’ lives.  Miranda’s story about getting busy in a Burger King bathroom was actually taken from my own life.  I enjoyed writing the scene just because I love writing good conversation – plus, it was a lot of fun giving Deven a giggle fit.

Not to mention, in order for Dev to know so enough about Harry Potter fan fiction to come up with an accurate-sounding porn fic username, he had to have read some at some point, and that thought give me  a giggle fit.

13. Shadowstorm – This Love

The scene where Deven and Nico finally sleep together was probably my favorite to write in Book 6.  I couldn’t tell you why, exactly; there are sexier moments in the book, and more emotional ones, but I worked hard to make it feel like the two of them hooking up was something earned, not just a matter of destiny shoving them together and voila, everything’s peachy.  They both went through a lot to reach each other.  To quote Nico’s thoughts, “Somehow in the midst of everything that was wrong, something had gone very, very right. ”

Don’t forget, Shadowstorm is now available for purchase in paperback and electronic forms – check out this post for more information.

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It’s Possible – I’ve Killed a Lot of People.

With Halloween just round the corner and a seemingly endless run of Forensic Files reruns on TV, I found myself pondering the many ways I’ve done my characters in, and how there are certain commonalities.  I apparently get off on blowing people up, for example.  (Who knew?)

Just sticking with the Shadow World novels it was quite a list.  I didn’t include large numbers of unnamed people who died in battles or explosions; I tried to stick mostly to people who at least had a name.

Obviously I’m no George R.R. Martin or anything, but I do seem to burn through vampires at an alarming rate.

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Five Shadow World Things…

…brought to you by the letter C.

1 ~ The Countdown Continues!

Only 36 days until the official release of Shadowflame! I’ll be doing one last ARC giveaway this week, and after that you guys are on your own until the book comes out. *laugh* Well, that’s not entirely true – since I’m currently way too broke to have a big launch party/benefit, I was thinking I might put a signed copy or two up for auction to benefit RAINN.  (I suppose if I was being smart I’d do it to benefit the “Keep Sylvan in Frou-Frou Coffee Beverages So She Can Finish Shadow’s Fall Before Her Unemployment Benefits Run Out” fund.  We’ll see.)

2 ~ A Conspiracy of Cartographers

Since I’m working on the aforementioned third book fast and furiously, I haven’t had time to come up with any fun new Shadow World extras, but I did just post something I made back when I was working on Queen of Shadows – a map of the US Signet territories.  I needed a reference so I’d know who had what state and where the Havens are located, and since I know people love maps, I thought I’d share it.  I don’t have a worldwide Signet map yet, though I’m working on it for Shadow’s Fall, when you’ll get to meet the entire Council.

Here, have a look if you like. Click on the pic to see the details (it’s rather large).

3 ~ A Categorical Caveat

I feel like I should say, before Shadowflame comes out, that if you’re going into it expecting another romance like Queen of Shadows, well…sorry.  There’s a reason QoS was labeled Urban Fantasy even though it was obviously a romantic story; Shadowflame has a faster pace and more action, though it definitely packs its own emotional wallop.  The series as a whole begins with Miranda and David’s courtship, but things aren’t always rosy in the land of Primes and Queens.  Mistakes will be made – huge ones – and evil of all kinds will try to tear our Pair apart, but I can promise you this:  no matter what happens, Miranda and David are mated in soul, and the only thing that can end their relationship is death. They’re stuck with each other’s flaws and fuckups until the day they die.   That doesn’t mean their relationship won’t evolve and change as they mature together, and it doesn’t mean there won’t be pain or loss, but it does mean that the foundation, their love for each other and their equal partnership, is forever.  I don’t write idyllic romances where everything is neat and tidy ever after. Not only is that kind of thing unrealistic, it’s boring.

4 ~ Continuation and Commitment

For those who have asked, ideally (purely hypothetical at this point) the series will be somewhere around eight books long.  This is totally subject to change depending on a) how the story goes and b) what my publisher decides it wants from me.  There is a lot of story to tell, and it gets pretty freaking epic in scale; there’s also another aspect of the Shadow World I could quite easily dive into and get another series out of.  But that’s way, way in the future; for now, I’m concentrating on the storyline of books 1-4.  (#4 hasn’t sold yet, but unless Ace wants to be very, very cruel to you all, hopefully they’ll take it.)

5 ~ Caught on Camera

If you’re interested in seeing some of the visual inspiration for the books, check out my Shadow World Pinboard; when I come across faces, places, and other things that help shape a character’s appearance or a scene setting in my mind, I Pin them for later perusal.  It has everything from what I envision the Signets looking like (sort of) to t-shirts David wears to the various animals and Austin landmarks that appear in the books.  I’m thinking that just for fun I might do a Google Map sometime of the actual places mentioned in Queen of Shadows – not all of them are real, but quite a few do exist, and if you’re ever in our fair city, you should visit them (and eat their ice cream, because OMG).

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And the Winner Is…

DianaH, come on down!!!

Please email me (diannesylvan at gmail dot com) with your mailing name/address as well as who you’d like your copy of Queen of Shadows signed to.

Thank you to everyone who entered!

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Queen of Shadows Giveaway #1!

Just in time for all your holiday shopping needs, I’d like to announce that I plan to give away one signed copy of Queen of Shadows to the lucky winner of this contest post.

To enter, just post a comment telling me what you’re most excited about for Shadowflame.  What question do you want to see answered?  What characters do you want to know more about?  Or do you just want to see Miranda kick as much ass as possible?  Feed my curiosity, and a signed copy could be yours.

Leave your name and a correct email address with your comment to be entered.

The contest will be open until noon on December 13, at which time I’ll use random.org to select the winner.

Happy commenting!  Spread the word to anyone you know who’d like a signed copy of Queen of Shadows. This is the first giveaway I’ve done, so I’m testing the waters a bit.  If it’s fun, I’ll do more, and might do other things, like bits of art…or bits of fiction.  We shall see.

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